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Submit your entries to the Giffie-Pet Poetry Contest here!
Please make sure to read the entry rules on the main page before submitting. Also, please put a <hr> tag after your entry. Your submission does not need to be on a different page; please submit it to this page!
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Example Entry
Screen Name: [Stephen]
Poem: <poem goes here>
Word Count: xxx

Post entries below this line!



1) Screen Name: [Deg]
Poem: Welcome, Elfpacker, to the Giffie-Pet store!
We have fuzzy-wuzzies and creepy-crawlies galore--
Pets that crawl and some that soar!
This is a special place filled with magic and lore,
All bets are off when you walk through our door!
So come on in and have a look around,
You can even adopt from our Giffie-Pet Pound.
Just keep in mind that you can only choose one!
Make your choice wisely and when you're all done,
You'll have a special friend to show off to everyone!
Word Count: 90





2) Screen Name: [Flisky]

Poem: A cat, a dog, a rodent too,
In green and red and even blue,
Find the one that's right for you.

Maybe you want a bird of red,
Or maybe a Llama with a brown head,
Just make sure you keep them fed.

Don't see what you're looking for,
Then go ahead and look some more,
Here at Giffie-Pet Store.

Word Count: 61





3)[Product of a Primal Urge]

Who doesn't like to romp and play
In a field or in a bay?
But friendless you'll no longer go
With a Giffie-pet to show
Atop your page and pick the name
Any name, from cool to lame.
Two legs, four legs, or none at all
Perhaps some wings and you'll have a ball.

W/C- 54




4) Screen Name: [Saffron]

Are you lonely friend?

Does your pain seem to have no end?

Well fear not for there is the Giffie-Pet Store

It's exactly the place that you are looking for

So rush right in and pick your pet

You won’t even have to take it to the vet

Once your home watch them play

Soon you will start to have a better day

They have charm, wit, and are pretty too

With rare breeds not seen at the zoo

Then come night fall tuck them in

and fall asleep with a satisfied grin

Word Count: 93





5) Screen Name: [Saffron]

There once was a cute red fox

Who got stuck in a big fat box

He scratched and clawed to find a way out

With no luck he soon began to pout

Then along came a Zombie

Who went chompy chompy

And that was the end of the cute little fox

Leaving behind a very red box

Word Count: 57





6) Screen Name: [Cerulean Sins]

Oh Giffie Fae so sweet and with
the flow, She brings so many pets
covered in fur, scales, feathers,
and in all different colours
that makes us purr with glee!
So come on down to the Giffe-Store!

Word Count: 38




7) Screen Name: [HeAVenShallBuRN]

If you find your life nothing but a bore
So bad that you fall asleep with a snore
Why not come on by to the giffie pet store!
We have dozens of pets
Ones that don’t even need a vet!
Pets that need lots of love
Yes yes, we might even have a Dove!
So come on by, anytime
Oh my…look at us rhyme!

64 words





8)[HeAVenShallBuRN]

Once my life, was a bore.
So I packed my bags
And headed to the giffie-pet store
They have lots of lovely little pets
So I bought one and
went to the Mets
It was a little cute blue puppy
Who looked a wee bit yuppy
Now this little blue creature
Is one of the higest feature
So don’t look so glum
Come on by and pet my chum!

69 words





9) [Yudan333]

Hug me,
Squeeze me,
But most of all love me.
Because as a pet I may get grumpy;
If you don't rub my tummy.
Play, roll, jump, squeak;
I enjoy a good game of hide and seek.
Fuzzy, fluffy, scaly, pokey.
Sacred, rare, popular and misunderstood;
We all enjoy a home if you could.
Come get one of us we don't bite;
We promise to give you a loving tender hug.
Don't forget to check out our site;
Please adopt us we'll be snug.

84 words





10) [sammie h!]

the Giffie pet store is a place for me
The best ever pets the eye can see.
There is normal house pets
Exotic ones to
And every single one of them
Can be earned by you

36 words





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2011-11-08 [Sigyn, The Faithful Wife]: There are two by yourself (Which I like) And two by Jimmy...

2011-11-08 [Saffron]: Thanks : ) I just rly want the prize that's why i submitted two of them. 

2011-11-08 [Saffron]: Figured a more advertisement piece and a funny zombie one was the key!

2011-11-08 [Stephen]: @[Sigyn, The Faithful Wife]
Try to be less hostile.


Rhyming is part of the theme set in place. The winning entry is going to be listed on the Giffie-Pet page, so it has pretty strict requirements. Which is also why the winner gets so much for winning.

I knew the entries wouldn't come in quickly, which is why there's an entry deadline instead of a date deadline. =P

2011-11-10 [Yudan333]: just put something in really quick since [Cerulean Sins] invited me. um some of it rhymes. I should have done a haiku lol

2011-11-10 [Stephen]: It's nice! :)

2011-11-10 [Product of a Primal Urge]: Damn, that was a quick set of submissions after almost nothing :D Way to go guys!

2011-11-10 [Stephen]: Just one more needed. :)

2011-11-11 [Saffron]: Yeah!!!!! Go team go!!! *cheers*

2011-11-11 [Deg]: 8D
ONLY ONE MORE NEEDED! YES!

Thank you all who submitted a poem, it's great to see some participation! I was getting discouraged that no one was entering and now all of a sudden so many are and it's wonderful. :)

2011-11-11 [Saffron]: : )

2011-11-15 [Saffron]: *snuffles* We still need one more! Who can I torment to make one...hrmm....

2011-11-15 [Stephen]: Torment [Morgoth]. :)

2011-11-23 [Saffron]: TY Sammie!

2011-11-23 [sammie h!]: Its ok, thought I would make it easier for you, so thought of one, now you can close it, ohh happy days lol.

2011-11-23 [Stephen]: @Sammie

Your poem doesn't rhyme. You should change it a little so it rhymes somewhat (or use the same word twice, close enough). I normally wouldn't care, but I made [Cerulean Sins] rewrite hers as well. It also needs a word count.

Please edit the page and fix those two mistakes. [=

2011-11-23 [sammie h!]: me
see

to
you

They both rhyme perfectly well??

2011-11-23 [Stephen]: Oh, I didn't notice that.
Me + see works.

to + you is kind of weird since it skips a line, but it's rhyming enough.


Alright, that's 10 entries. Contest submission period is over! :P

2011-11-23 [Stephen]: I'll get some input about the poems, and then open a vote. =]

2011-11-23 [sammie h!]: Thanks [Stephen] :)

2011-11-23 [Stephen]: You're welcome. :)

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